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Illustration of a graph with percentages of recycling rates

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The graph describes the percentages of recycling rates of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics from 1982 to 2010. Initially, paper and cardboard were at 65% recycling rate in 1982. Then the rate rose to 70% in 1986 and continued the trend to reach 80% in 1990. Finally, it dropped linearly over the years and settled at 70% in 2010. The recycling rate of glass followed a downward trend starting from 50% in 1982 to 40% in 1990 and, it slowly increased passing the years and reached 60% in 2010. Even though, the aluminium recycling started late in 1986 with around 5% rate, it managed to have an increasing trend in the rates and stood at around 45% in 2010. Plastics recycling was started even more later in 1990 but it raised minimally for ten years and was just nearer to 10% in 2010. The graph was easy to understand and, after all peaks and crests the paper and cardboard managed to have a highest recycling rate over the remaining materials.
The graph
describes
the percentages of
recycling
rates
of paper and cardboard, glass containers,
aluminium
cans and plastics from 1982 to 2010.

Initially
, paper and cardboard were at 65%
recycling
rate
in 1982. Then the
rate
rose to 70% in 1986 and continued the trend to reach 80% in 1990.
Finally
, it dropped
linearly
over the years and settled at 70% in 2010.

The
recycling
rate
of glass followed a downward trend starting from 50% in 1982 to 40% in 1990 and, it
slowly
increased passing the years and reached 60% in 2010.
Even though
, the
aluminium
recycling
started
late in 1986 with around 5%
rate
, it managed to have an increasing trend in the
rates
and stood at around 45% in 2010. Plastics
recycling
was
started
even more later in 1990
but
it raised
minimally
for ten years and was
just
nearer to 10% in 2010.

The graph was easy to understand and,
after all
peaks and crests the paper and cardboard managed to have
a
highest
recycling
rate
over the remaining materials.
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IELTS academic Illustration of a graph with percentages of recycling rates

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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