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The percentage of American email users who consider emails necessary connecting to otherwise unreachable people

The percentage of American email users who consider emails necessary connecting to otherwise unreachable people 6K9Aj
Last year, when asked if email helps them to communicate with people they would otherwise be unable to communicate with, 22 per cent of email users agreed and another 43 per cent agreed strongly. Only 7 per cent responded that they disagreed and 10 per cent responded that they disagreed strongly. Just under a fifth were not sure either way. By this year, opinions had changed dramatically. The percentage of those who strongly disagreed halved, while the proportion who disagreed fell by just over a quarter. Correspondingly, the percentage of those who agreed or strongly agreed rose. The former increased slightly by only 3%, but the latter went up by just under a third The fact that the percentage of those who neither agreed or disagreed had almost halved by this year suggests that people had begun to realize the potential of the medium.
Last year, when asked if email
helps
them to communicate with

people
they would
otherwise
be unable to communicate with,

22 per cent of email users
agreed
and another 43 per cent

agreed
strongly
.
Only
7 per cent responded that they disagreed

and 10 per cent responded that they disagreed
strongly
.
Just


under a fifth were not sure either way.

By this year, opinions had
changed
dramatically
. The percentage of

those who
strongly
disagreed halved, while the proportion who

disagreed fell by
just
over a quarter.
Correspondingly
, the

percentage of those who
agreed
or
strongly
agreed
rose. The

former increased
slightly
by
only
3%,
but
the latter went up

by
just
under a third

The fact that the percentage of those who neither
agreed
or


disagreed had almost halved by this year suggests that
people


had begun to realize the potential of the medium.
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IELTS academic The percentage of American email users who consider emails necessary connecting to otherwise unreachable people

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