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As we can see, the diagram above demonstrates how Southwest airport looks like right now and compares it with how it going to be after 1 year from now. Before us, we can see there is a complete difference with the number of gates, which is only 8 gates, and they are planning to make 8 more by the next year. In addition to this, they replaced the walkway with a sky train to make it easier for passengers to get from and to the airport. The upgrades don't stop here, they also will place an ATM in the arrivals hall to help people who are coming from other countries, to get some cash. Moreover, the cafe place will be moved to the western south of the departures hall, and they will also add a new one in the arrivals hall. there will be a care hiring place, which is also a new addition to the arrivals hall. Although, only security and passport control in the departures hall, and customs and passport control in the arrivals hall will stay as they are with no changes. All that will definitely rise the orders for flying in this airport also will increase the income for people who are responsible for this project.

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, and they will also
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 security and passport control in the Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "departures'" or "departure's"?departures'departure's
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