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Future jobs,The Value of your humanity in an automated future

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Kevin Roose (2020) in his conversation called “The Value of your humanity in an automated future”, which is replaced by electronic machines, shared information about advantages and disadvantages about automated future. To begin with, Kevin explored about automated robots, and his point of view consists of that people have been preparing for automated future, which is significantly wrong. Based on the fact, that if hi-tech is the key of the future, people would be closer with them. Moreover, in the future will be more demanded exact sciences such as, math, engineering, and data science, where soft abilities, who is owned by artist, writers, and philosophers. However, from his findings, he discovered a new method to human work, where instead of technologies, it could be use humans and humans emotions, which is more realistic and funnier, Rus Garofalo is a vivid example, also Marcus Books, which is located in Oakland, which is still working for 60 years. In conclusion, Kevin wants to convey to people, that technology is not always benefit for us, because robots can not feel emotions, as long as human can.
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robots, and his point of view consists of that
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will be more demanded exact sciences such as, math, engineering, and data science, where soft abilities, who is
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owned
by artist, writers, and philosophers.
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, from his findings, he discovered a new method to
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human
work, where
instead
of technologies, it could be
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use
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emotions, which is more realistic and funnier,
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Marcus Books, which
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, Kevin wants to convey to
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people
, that technology is not always benefit for us,
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IELTS academic Future jobs, The Value of your humanity in an automated future

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  American English
2 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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