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The line graph compares the figure for consuming more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish every day between three different groups in the UK from 2011 to 2017. It is clear that the figure of the three groups all experienced an upward trend through the period of 6 years. Nevertheless, eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish every day was the most popular among women. During 2011-2013, the percentage of the women group remained steady at 20%. Meanwhile, there was a slight growth of 2% in the men group, reaching nearly equal to women in 2013. In 2011, the figure for children was lowest among the three groups with only 10 percent. Over the next 2 years, it rose to 13% though having a slight drop in 2012. In 2013, the percentage of the most popular group increased dramatically, peaking at approximately 36 percent in 2016. Then, it dropped to 30 percent at the end of the survey. The figure of men and children both witnessed a slight fluctuation from 2013 to 2017. While the percentage of children ranged from 13% to 15%, those of men in the UK ranged from nearly 20% to 26%.

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