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The given bar chart illustrate information about the expense of the France and the United Kingdom on consumer goods in 2010. the scale in pounds.

The given bar chart illustrate information about the expense of the France and the United Kingdom on consumer goods in 2010. the scale in pounds. G3wdm

overover, all the graph clearly seen both countries was highest money spent on cars. then, the British and the France was expense on least amount to perform and commerce respectively. To begin with, in term of the car in UK consumer spen little more than 4, 50, 000 pounds. while on the other side France people was 4, 00, 000 pounds on cars. then, the both countries consumers spend on books was 4, 00, 000 and 3, 00, 000 pounds respectively. moreover, the France consumer spend on cameras was1, 50, 000 pounds and United Kingdom spend cost was 3, 50, 000 pounds. Furthermore, there were two good on which France spend higher the uk on computers and perfume. expenditure of France in computer was nearly 3, 70, 000 pounds. in contrast, uk decrement on computers which was 350000 pounds. then, the France and the United Kingdom was spend on the United Kingdom was spend on perfume were 2, 00, 000 and 1, 40, 000 pounds.

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 both countries was A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
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then
, the British and the France was expense on least amount to perform and commerce respectively
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begin
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while
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then
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spend
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moreover
, the France consumer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spend
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spend
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uk
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expenditure
 of France in computer was nearly
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in
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uk
 decrement on computers which was Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.350000 pounds (ca. 159 t)350000 pounds (158.76 t)350000 pounds (ca. 159 ton)350000 pounds (158.76 ton)350000 pounds (ca. 158,757 kg)350000 pounds (158,757.33 kg)
350000 pounds
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
, the France and the United Kingdom was Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 on the United Kingdom was Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 on perfume were 2, 00, 000 and 1, 40, 000 pounds. 