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Thailand's Urban Planning

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For the past 20 years, Thailand has managed to triple its GDP of 126. 4 B$ to an all-time high of 544. 3B$. Undoubtedly, Bangkok has played a significant role in our success, and we should be thankful for them. From an agricultural land to being the heart of Asia's businesses, the city has managed to get through multiple stages of absurdly bad urban planning. Bangkok is notorious for its transportation system. This city is the only city in Thailand where you walk faster than a moving car. Even with this speed, Bangkok has still managed to be in the top list of "Road Traffic Accident. "
For the past 20 years, Thailand has managed to triple its GDP of 126. 4
B$
to an all-time high of 544. 3B$.
Undoubtedly
, Bangkok has played a significant role in our success, and we should be thankful for them. From an agricultural land to being the heart of Asia's businesses, the city has managed to
get
through multiple stages of
absurdly
bad
urban planning.

Bangkok is notorious for its transportation system. This city is the
only
city in Thailand where you walk faster than a moving car. Even with this speed, Bangkok has
still
managed to be in the top list of
"
Road Traffic Accident.
"
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IELTS academic Thailand's Urban Planning

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2 paragraphs
106 words
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