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Many people choosing to be self-employed rather than being employed by a company or organisation.

Many people choosing to be self-employed rather than being employed by a company or organisation. BLlop
In the present times, there is a growing trend among people choosing to be self-employed rather than to be employed by a company or organisation. This trend may be influenced by a variety of factors. Firstly, a rapidly growing economy accompanied by huge advances in industrialisation only mean that the employees have to work more than before, in terms of efficiency and duration. This often leads to a hectic work schedule leaving the average employee stressed out over the long run. At the same time, a growing market tends to willingly incorporate even the smallest of businesses, thus attracting the stressed out employees towards them.
In the present times, there is a growing trend among
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choosing to be self-employed
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company
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organisation
. This trend may
be influenced
by a variety of factors.

Firstly
, a
rapidly
growing economy accompanied by huge advances in
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industrialisation
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only
mean that the employees
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have to
work more than
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before
, in terms of efficiency and duration. This
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often
leads to a hectic work schedule leaving the average employee
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stressed
out over the long run. At the same time, a growing market tends to
willingly
incorporate even the smallest of businesses,
thus
attracting the
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stressed
out employees towards them.
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IELTS academic Many people choosing to be self-employed rather than being employed by a company or organisation.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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