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information of UK about production of gas,coal and oil for year 1990 to 2010.

information of UK about production of gas, coal and oil for year 1990 to 2010. 25DnA
The given chart illustrates information about emission sources of UK greenhouse for year 1990 to 2010. Measurement of fuel emission is given in millions. Overall, the given chart show the highest emission of coal in year 1990 and by the years goes on the coal emission decreases as lowest emission in year 2010, at the same time gas has reverse effect, it have highest emission in year 2010 and lowest emission in 1990. Firstly, in 1990 the coal was the main emission which was used by UK in year 1990 which was around 300+ million tones in number, as time went use of coal decreased in year 2010 which was lowest in all years as around 180+ million tones. The oil emission was not changed drastically over the periods. It has minor changes as years went. The average oil emission was around 250+ million tones. In addition, the third emission shows in chart is gas. Which have drastic change over the years and it was used more and more as years went. In year 1990 the gas emission was around 220+ in numbers and after 20 years it was 320+ million tones. This is the highest used emission by UK in 2010.
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sources of UK greenhouse for
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1990 to 2010. Measurement of fuel
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in millions.

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the highest
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of coal in
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1990 and by the years goes on the coal
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decreases as lowest
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in
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2010, at the same time gas has reverse effect, it
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2010 and lowest
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in 1990.

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, in 1990 the coal was the main
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which was
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by UK in
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1990 which was
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300+
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tones in number, as time went
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of coal decreased in
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2010 which was lowest in all years as
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tones. The oil
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was not
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drastically
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as years went. The average oil
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in chart is gas. Which have drastic
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over the years and it was
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more and more
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1990 the gas
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220+ in numbers and after 20 years it was 320+
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by UK in 2010.
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IELTS academic information of UK about production of gas, coal and oil for year 1990 to 2010.

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