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The number of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012

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The line graph illustrates how the number of turtles changed between 1980 and 2012 years. The graphic presents the data about the number of turtles in India with average population and all kinds of turtles. Overall, one of the most common species in India are the Olive Ridley Turtles. Nevertheless, the number of the Leatherback turtles in India continued to decline and it was at risk of extinction. In detail, the number of Green Turtles, Leatherback Turtles and Olive Ridley Turtles were analogous from 1980 to 1988. After 1988th year, turtle population changed and in 2012 the number of Leatherback Turtles decreased dramatically to 60 index from 100 index. In addition, in 2012 the number of Green Turtles also dipped to 80 index from 90. Both of this kinds had lower population than other species in 2012 year. However, the number of Olive Ridley Turtles kinds raised during years between 1988 and 2012 and this kind was more in 2012 compared to other species.
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between 1980 and 2012 years. The graphic presents the data about the
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in India with average population and all
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in India continued to decline and it was at
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In detail, the
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of Green
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,
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Leatherback
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and Olive
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were analogous from 1980 to 1988. After 1988th
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,
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population
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and in 2012 the
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decreased
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from 100
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dipped to 80
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from 90. Both of
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had lower population than other species in 2012
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raised during years between 1988 and 2012 and this
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was more in 2012 compared to other species.
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