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The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010 YLV5K
The bar chart compares the monthly expenditures ( in January, February, March and April) on three categories food, gas and clothing in dollars of an american family in the year 2010. Overall, it is clear that there were dramatically increases of buying clothes and payment of gas resources higher than the average. And also the figure for buying foods fell down to the average. In the months, January, February and march payment for gas didn't change with about 320 dollars, while buying clothes rose to 590 from 220 dollars, in January and March. But this level declined to 300 dollars in march. By April, spending money to gas and clothing grew to 580 and 690 dollars, respectively. In January, spending money to buy food was just under 500 dollars and this level rose to the peak at 590 dollars in February and it went down to nearly 360 dollars, in April.
The bar chart compares the monthly expenditures
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in January, February, March and April) on three categories food,
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gas
and clothing in
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dollars
of an
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american
family in the year 2010.
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, it is
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clear
that there were
dramatically
increases of buying clothes and payment of
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gas
resources higher than the average. And
also
the figure for buying foods fell down to the average. In the months, January, February and march payment for
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gas
didn't
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change
with about 320
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dollars
, while buying clothes rose to 590 from 220
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dollars
, in January and March.
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But
this level declined to 300
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dollars
in
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march
. By April, spending money to
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gas
and clothing grew to 580 and 690
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dollars
,
respectively
. In January, spending money to
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buy
food was
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just
under 500
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dollars
and this level rose to the peak at 590
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dollars
in February and it went down to
nearly
360
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dollars
, in April.

IELTS academic The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010

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