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The number of space crafts launched by various national government bwtween 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission

The number of space crafts launched by various national government bwtween 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission 5OdA
The pie chart indicates the number of spacecrafts launched by national government and data provides the information about the variois purpose of each mission during period 1957 to 2007 Top top 2 nations that launched number of spacecrafts during 1957-2007 are more than 1000 spacecrafts. SovietRussia and USA launched about 3484 and 1764. The major purpose of launching the spacecrafts is for communication purpose. It is abour 26% and surveillance satellite is about 18% during period 1957-2007
The pie chart indicates the number of
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launched by national
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and data provides the information about the
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purpose of each mission during period 1957 to 2007

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Top top
2 nations that launched number of
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spacecrafts
during 1957-2007 are more than 1000
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SovietRussia
and USA launched about 3484 and 1764.

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is for communication purpose. It is
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26% and surveillance satellite is about 18% during period 1957-2007
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IELTS academic The number of space crafts launched by various national government bwtween 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission

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