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The assigned chat illustrate the information of employment rate accros in six countries such as Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, uk new Zealand and usa from 1995 to 2005At the feeling glance, In Australia, the employment rates of male were less than 60% in 1995.

The assigned chat illustrate the information of employment rate accros in six countries such as Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, uk new Zealand and usa from 1995 to 2005At the feeling glance, In Australia, the employment rates of male were less than 60% in 1995. LMp1
The assigned chat illustrate the information of employment rate accros in six countries such as Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, uk new Zealand and usa from 1995 to 2005At the feeling glance, In Australia, the employment rates of male were less than 60% in 1995. After 10 years, Number of employed men increased in 2005. on the other hand, in 1995 employment rate of female was less than 30% in Australia female employment is lower than males. In 2005, the number of female employment is little bit increased than 1995 year. Futhermore, it can be seen that in two there is not major difference in employment rates such as Switzerland and uk. in two countries, the highest Number of employment rates is I'm sewitzerland for males in 2005 and lowest number of female in 1995. Moreover, it can be seen that in Iceland country, there is highest number of males in employed rates 80%in 2005 and 70%number of male in 1995 years. The number of female employed was 40 percent in 1995 and more than 50% female in 2005. Additionally in two countries such as new zealand and usa from 1995 to 2005 the percentage of males were similar in these year. yet, in usa the lowest number of female in 1995 was less than 50% in 2005, the number of employed female increased to 60% Overall, the highest number of employee males in Australia and number of female employee rate was less in 3 decades.
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IELTS academic The assigned chat illustrate the information of employment rate accros in six countries such as Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, uk new Zealand and usa from 1995 to 2005At the feeling glance, In Australia, the employment rates of male were less than 60% in 1995.

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