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The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. kPQ8
The provided line graph illustrates the number of various kinds of fish worldwide from 1982 to 2007. Overall, there were four different species of fish namely, Atlantic God, Haddock, Yellow Fin Tuna and Swordfish. Although the number of Atlantic God and Yellow Fin Tuna decreased over the time period with minor fluctuations, the number of Haddock and Swordfish remained constant. - [ ] More specifically, 2, 40, 000 Atlantic God fish were noticed in 1982. This figure declined to 1, 50, 000 in 1992, before rising to 1, 70, 000 in 2002. Likewise, the number of Yellow Fin Tuna dropped by 50, 000 in 2007. It hit its peak in 1992 at 2, 00, 000. In contrast, the number of Haddock and Swordfish unchanged at 70, 000 and 10, 000 respectively over the time period. - [ ]
The provided line graph illustrates the
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of various kinds of fish worldwide from 1982 to 2007.

Overall
, there were four
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species of fish
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, Atlantic God, Haddock, Yellow Fin Tuna and Swordfish. Although the
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number
of Atlantic God and Yellow Fin Tuna decreased over the time period with minor fluctuations, the
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number
of Haddock and Swordfish remained constant.

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specifically
, 2, 40, 000 Atlantic God fish
were noticed
in 1982. This figure declined to 1, 50, 000 in 1992,
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rising to 1, 70, 000 in 2002.
Likewise
, the
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number
of Yellow Fin Tuna dropped by 50, 000 in 2007. It hit its peak in 1992 at 2, 00, 000.
In contrast
, the
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of Haddock and Swordfish unchanged at 70, 000 and 10, 000
respectively
over the time period.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

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