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The graph below shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with th world average class size in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting t main points and give comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates the primary school and lower secondary school class size in South Kom Japan, the UK, Denmark, Mexico and Iceland and also gives the world average in 2006. Overall, South Korea had the largest class size while Iceland had the least class size for bot primary and secondary schools. Also, Mexico had the largest difference in the class size betwee primary and secondary schools. The primary school class size in South Korea was 34 whereas for secondary school the aver class size was slightly higher at 36. Similarly, the average primary school class size was lessert the lower secondary school class size in Japan, Mexico and Iceland, The primary school Tige for Japan and Iceland were 27 and 15 respectively whereas the secondary school figures were for Japan and 16 for Iceland. Mexico had a lower secondary school class size of 31. Howev primary school class size was significantly lesser at 21. On the other hand, the number of students on average in British and Danish primaY outnumbered the students in their lower secondary schools. The primary schools class size was around 22 in these countries while the lower secondary school class size was around 20 Finally the world average for primary schools was observed at 26 while the figure for the lower school secondary schools was 24.
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