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The number of houses built per year in the cities of Derby and Nottingham are given. Sumaarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The number of houses built per year in the cities of Derby and Nottingham are given. Sumaarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary. lR0mK
The given bar graph conpares number of houses built over a period of decade in the cities of Derby and Nottingham which varies in an indefinite number. From the given information, in the year 2000 and 2001, number of houses built in the cities of Detby were almost same in number, which rapidly increased to double in 2 years. On other side, for cities of Nottingham, houses reported to rise in 2000 & 2001 and decreased steeply in 2002. From year 2003 upto 2007, same number of houses were constructed every year i. e- 120 houses in the cities of Derby. On contrary, numbers varied constantly, each year in the cities Nottingham. For years 2003 to 2005, it stradily increased from 50 to 80 houses respectively. Then it drastically fall to almost less than 10 houses in a year of 2006. In 2007, it showed sharp rise with 190 new houses. For cities of Nottingham in 2008, the numbers went down to 10 houses and these doubled for cities of Derby in same year after a constant plateau. In 2009, cities of both Derby & Nottingham reported highest number of houses made in almost a span of 9 years. In conclusion, the number of houses constructed in cities of Derby showed a constant increase with few hitch. For cities of Nottingham, these numbers fluctuated every year.
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built over a period of decade in the
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cities
of Derby and Nottingham which varies in an indefinite number.

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information, in the
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2000 and 2001,
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built in the
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of
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Detby
were almost same in
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, which
rapidly
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cities
of Nottingham,
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houses
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reported to rise
in 2000 & 2001 and decreased
steeply
in 2002.

From
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2003
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upto
2007, same
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of
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every
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i. e- 120
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in the
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cities
of Derby. On contrary,
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varied
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in the
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Nottingham. For years 2003 to 2005, it
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stradily
increased from 50 to 80
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in a
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of 2006. In 2007, it
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sharp rise with 190 new
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For
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of Nottingham in 2008, the
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went down to 10
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and these doubled for
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after a constant plateau. In 2009,
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of both Derby & Nottingham reported highest
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of
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made in almost a span of 9 years.

In conclusion
, the
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constructed in
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cities
of Derby
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showed
a constant increase with
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. For
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fluctuated every
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IELTS academic The number of houses built per year in the cities of Derby and Nottingham are given. Sumaarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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