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the number of consumption spreads (Margarine , lowfat and Butter) which were consumed during 26 years.

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The line graph shows the number of consumption spreads (Margarine, lowfat and Butter) which were consumed during 26 years. Overall, it is clear that, the amount of all kinds of spreads declined dramatically from 1981 to 2007. Interestingly, the amount of lowfat rose dramatically between 1996 and 2001 while the figure fell final 6 years. The amount of butter grew sharply from 140 to 160 grams whereas the figure was a moderate decrease to 100 grams in 1991 and Margarine declined from 90 to 80 grams, Then the figure overtook the former in the three seven years. Although letter rose, it unchanged by 100 grams next seven years. As a for, Butter stood at 50 grams in the final years and the amount of Butter and Margarine were almost the same grams. The amount of lowfat was the least result, however the figure showed a fast rise between 1996 and 2001. Eventhough lowfat rose quickly, in the final years, lowfat declined by 20 grams (from 80 to 60).
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which
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, it is
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that, the
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of all kinds of spreads declined
dramatically
from 1981 to 2007.
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amount
of
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lowfat
rose
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between 1996 and 2001 while the
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fell final 6 years.

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of
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butter
grew
sharply
from 140 to 160
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whereas the
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was a moderate decrease to 100
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grams
in 1991 and Margarine declined from 90 to 80
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, Then the
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overtook the former in the three seven years. Although letter rose,
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unchanged by 100
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next
seven years. As a for,
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stood at 50
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grams
in the final years and the
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of
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Butter
and Margarine were almost the same grams.

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of
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lowfat
was the least result,
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rise between 1996 and 2001.
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declined by 20
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IELTS academic the number of consumption spreads (Margarine, lowfat and Butter) which were consumed during 26 years.

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