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the precentage of Divorc rates which in Finland and Sweden

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The bar graph displays the precentage of Divorc rates which in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015. Overall. As it can be seen the biggest precentage of divorc rates was belong to Sweden untill final year mean while the least precentage was showed by Finland. In Finland Regarding to in 2011 year it consisted of 36%. It declined rapidly and 2013 year it grew slightly and again rose moderately up coming year i remain stebly 33%, 39% and 41% correspondingly. In Sweden. The precentage of divorc rates only showed the bigger rate. Its first precentage demostrated 44% and high record showed 49% in 2012. Afterwards it went down rapidly in 2013 year 47%, 2014 year 45% and final year showed the least pracentage it owned 37%. More interestingly in given countries the least and the biggest precentage was in 2012. 33% and 49% ceorrespondingly.
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Divorc
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which in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.

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the biggest
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it consisted of 36%. It declined
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33%, 39% and 41%
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In Sweden. The
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rates
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49% in 2012. Afterwards it went down
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47%, 2014
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