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the number of waste produced of three companies from 2000 year to 2015.

the number of waste produced of three companies from 2000 year to 2015. K3A00

The line graph illustrares the number of waste produced of three companies from 2000 year to 2015. As it can be seen waste produced of c company grew rapidly however this number declined moderately in a company onthe time b company climbed slightly but it decreased significantly too in given period. With regards to company a, its number was the biggest among others (12 tonnes) whereas this number diped from 12 tonnes to 8 tonnes during 15 years. It reduced second time in given period. Onec declined from 11 to 9 upcoming years it declined gradually. The number of b company was 8 tonnes. It grew rapidly but in 2005 year. It declined significantly from 10 tonnes to 7 tonnes. In the final years it had been 3 tonnes. During 15 years the number of c company only climbed from 4 tonnes to 10 tonnes first it climbed from 4 tonnes to 6 tonnes, second time from 6 tonnes to 7 tonnes between 2005 and 2010. High number grew considerably between 7 tonnes and 10 tonnes in the final years.

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companies
 from 2000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 to 2015.

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company
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number
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declined
moderately
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company
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 time b You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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but
 it decreased significantly
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given
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Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
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company
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a,
 its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 was the biggest among others (12 tonnes) whereas this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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diped
 from 12 tonnes to 8 tonnes during 15 years. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 second time in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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Onec
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declined
 from 11 to 9 upcoming years it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrefusedismissdenyreject
declined
gradually
.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of b You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 was 8 tonnes. It grew rapidly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2005 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. It You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrefusedismissdenyreject
declined
significantly
 from 10 tonnes to 7 tonnes. In the final years it had been 3 tonnes.

During 15 years the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of c You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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 climbed from 4 tonnes to 10 tonnes first
 it climbed from 4 tonnes to 6 tonnes, second time from 6 tonnes to 7 tonnes between 2005 and 2010. High You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 grew considerably
 between 7 tonnes and 10 tonnes in the final years. 