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The graph below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual population of 2000.

The graph below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual population of 2000. 5bjoB

The table below provides information about the mob of Sao Paulo, Jakarta, and Shanghai in 1990 and 2000 and the predicted population in 2000. The graph depicts, the most crowded city in 1990 was Sao Paulo nearly 15 million in contrast the less population was for Jakarta merely 9. 5million in that year. However, the people of Jakarta were less than shanghai but has more increased in 2000 compared to shanghai and reach 12. 5 million from 13. 5 million. In addition, in the predicted crowd for 2000 that had made in 1990, the table shows the population in Sao Paulo had significant growth and somewhat the population forecast was approximately near to actual population while for the city of Jakarta this prediction was not the same as Shanghai. The predicted population column shows the society of Shanghai would be 17 million in 2000 whereas the actual crowd of this city was almost double only 17. 5 million in that year. Also, the graph displays the population of Shanghai would be increased near 17 million but in reality, there was a slight decline in the number of people in 2000. Overall, the number of citizenship was a gradual rise for Sao Paulo and Jakarta and it was almost close respectively 18million and 17. 5 million. unlike, the population of Jakarta was decreased by about 1million.

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population
 in 2000.

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