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The chart show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. The spending are measured in pounds sterling.

The chart show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. The spending are measured in pounds sterling. pJBw0

The chart illustrate the expenditure of two countries (France and UK) on consumer goods in 2010. The spending (Cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, car and books are the higher values over the period given, it also research the higher spending in comparison with the other items. Additionally the least sold item was perfume it just had under the 150, 000 pounds in United Kingdom and exactly 200, 000 pounds in France. With regards to the amount of expenditure on United Kingdom there was three items that was highest than France, those was camera, books and cars, around 450, 000 in its higher expend. Additionally France just had two high expenditures in this year those was perfume and computer. The last one reached about 375, 000 pounds sterling. On the other hand, there was a big differences between one it was cameras in France people did not spend much money in this article to different of UK where the people spent a little more than 350, 000.

The chart Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "illustrates".illustrates
illustrate
 the expenditure of two countries (France and UK) on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in 2010. The spending (Cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) are measured
 in pounds sterling.

Overall
, car and books are the higher values over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
, it also
Did you mean "researches"?researches
research
 the higher spending in comparison
 with the other items. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Additionally,
Additionally
 the least sold item was perfume it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 had under the 150, 000 pounds A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".in the United Kingdom
in United Kingdom
 and exactly 200, 000 pounds in France.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 the amount of expenditure A determiner is probably missing here: "on the United Kingdom".on the United Kingdom
on United Kingdom
Did you mean "there were three items"?there were three items
there was three items
 that was Use "higher" to make a comparison with this adjective.higher
highest
 than France, those was camera, books and cars, around 450, 000 in its higher expend. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Additionally,
Additionally
 France This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 had two high expenditures in this year those was perfume and computer. The last one reached about 375, 000 pounds sterling.

On the other hand
, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 differences between one it was cameras in France This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 did not spend much money in this article to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 of UK where the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spent a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 more than 350, 000. 