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The give map Illustrates the information regarding the Layout of conference center between it's present and future plan.

The give map Illustrates the information regarding the Layout of conference center between it's present and future plan. 5bjJm
To begin with reception are build on South direction on the right side of reception cafe are located on the opposite side toilents facility are provide for the employees. in the center of the center one Hall are bulid for doing any type of work in left side of Hall two meeting rooms are suitated. road are build for South to North corner along car park facility. Beautiful garden are build for the employees
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begin
with reception are build on South direction on the right side of reception
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cafe
are located
on the opposite side
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toilents
facility are
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provide
for the employees.
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in
the center of the center one Hall are
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bulid
for doing any type of work in
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left
side of Hall two meeting rooms are
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suitated
.
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road
are build for South to North corner along car park facility.
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Beautiful
garden are build for the
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employees
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IELTS academic The give map Illustrates the information regarding the Layout of conference center between it's present and future plan.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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