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the number cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992

the number cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992 JoLV5

The graph below point out about the quantity data of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad during ten years. in general, diarrhea in Mashhad experienced fluctuating change even though at the end of the data there was a significant dive. According to the information in the graph, they compered this data during ten years: 1983 until 1992. In 1983 the starting point for the study indicated that diarrhea rate is 100 cases. Hereinafter, in 1984 until 1987 witnessed an upward trend, although not too significant, to around 200 cases. In 1988, this disease rapidly a collapse passed the base line research point in 1983 which the figure was below 100 problem soundness. The following year, in 1989 showed a very significant skyrocket and of all data this year touched the highest point because it reached fourfold from the base year of the study. Furthermore, from 1990 to 1991 remained steady around 350 cases, although it decreased when compered to 1989. At the end of the watchfulness year, in 1990 being the bottom most point in this cases because of zero case.

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