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The diagram below shows how the water cycle works

The diagram below shows how the water cycle works 6xdmW
The diagram illustrates how the water cycle operates. Overall, there are 4 stages in the diagram, which are carried out for the extremely necessary air for us. Initially, water that is stored in the sea evaporate to invisible water vapour, which forms clouds thanks to wind and after this clouds cool further, causing rain. This rain watering soil and roots of trees, after that goes transpiration from plants and trees, furthermore part of the water in the form of precipitation falls directly into the sea. The rest of the liquid is accumulated and delivered to the waters of the oceans with the help of drains.
The diagram illustrates how the
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water
cycle operates.

Overall
, there are 4 stages in the diagram, which
are carried
out for the
extremely
necessary air for us.

Initially
,
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water
that
is stored
in the sea evaporate to invisible
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water
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vapour
, which forms clouds thanks to wind and after this clouds cool
further
, causing rain. This rain watering soil and roots of trees, after that goes transpiration from plants and trees,
furthermore
part of the
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water
in the form of precipitation falls
directly
into the sea. The rest of the liquid
is accumulated
and delivered to the
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waters
of the oceans with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of drains.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the water cycle works

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