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The multiple line chart give information about comparison of gender population who reads bibliotheca books between 2009 and 2012 at Starmouth School.

The multiple line chart give information about comparison of gender population who reads bibliotheca books between 2009 and 2012 at Starmouth School. NwKWj
In general, the young females consistently increased ro read a bibliotheca books from 2009 to 2012 and inversely proportional to the young males population that decline experience after 2011. For details information, at the starting point actually girls population are below than boys for reading activity of bibliotheca books. From 2009 to 2010 both of population slowly rose, approximately the number of books reads by young females are 40 and young males are 80. However, after that there was dramatically increased in young females population who reads a bibliotheca books until reach the peak around 140 in 2012. Vice versa with the young males population that dropped experience after 2011 and the last point of number of books read is in 80, actually back to the same amount like in 2010.
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bibliotheca
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from 2009 to 2012 and
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young
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males
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that decline experience after 2011.

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than boys for reading activity of
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bibliotheca
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. From 2009 to 2010 both of
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population
slowly
rose, approximately the number of
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by
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females are 40 and
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males are 80.
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females
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who
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reads
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bibliotheca
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until reach the peak around 140 in 2012. Vice versa with the
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young
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males
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population
that dropped experience after 2011 and the last point of number of
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books
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is in 80, actually back to the same amount
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IELTS academic The multiple line chart give information about comparison of gender population who reads bibliotheca books between 2009 and 2012 at Starmouth School.

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