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The graph highlights the amount of material used in cups and paper cups .

The graph highlights the amount of material used in cups and paper cups. pamb2
The table graph depicts the information about the amount of material use for making in two quality cups. At the first glance, it is crystal clear that, the maximum water use for making 1000, paper cups (10m3) as compared the 1000, polystyrene cups (0. 6m3). Apart from this, 78 kilowatts consume electricity by 1000, paper cups and 6 kilowatts use in 1000, polystyrene cups. The 1000, polystyrene cups need to petroleum for making cups it is 8 kg and 18 kg petroleum use in 100, paper cups. Furthermore, the stream use in 1000, polystyrene cups stood at 130kg as against 1000, paper cups (0: 56kg ). In addition to this, the chemicals use is both cups about 13kg and 8 kg respectively. At last, the maximum wood use in 1000 paper cups (220) and in polystyrene cups not use wood for making. Overall, this materials must use for making cups and if miss something in materials as result, the cups not make in better quality
The table graph depicts the information about the amount of material
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for making in two quality
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. At the
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that, the maximum water
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for making 1000, paper
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(10m3) as compared the 1000, polystyrene
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(0. 6m3). Apart from this, 78 kilowatts consume electricity by 1000, paper
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and 6 kilowatts
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in 1000, polystyrene
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. The 1000, polystyrene
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need to petroleum for making
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it is 8 kg and 18 kg petroleum
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in 100, paper
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, the stream
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in 1000, polystyrene
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stood at
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130kg
as against 1000, paper
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(0:
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56kg
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is both
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about
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13kg
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. At last, the maximum wood
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(220) and in polystyrene
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not
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wood for making.
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