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The graph below shows the number of mail services of TNT and FedEx between 1920 and 2000.

The graph below shows the number of mail services of TNT and FedEx between 1920 and 2000. qaP85

The provided line graph compares the statistics about delivering posts by two different companies, such as FedEx and TNT, from 1920 to 2000. Overall, it is evident that TNT’s service saw an upward trend over a period shown, while the number of parcels delivered by FedEx slightly changed despite some fluctuations. In 1920, the number of parcels of TNT were around 5, 000 and rose slightly to reach about 7, 500 in 1940. After it has levelled off for 20 years, it started increasing noticeably until 1960 and reached 11, 000. The numbers remained relatively unchanged between 1960 and 1980, and unexpectedly soared dramatically in 1980 and surged by 15, 000 until 2, 000. The figure for a FedEx showed 15, 000 in 1980 and it rose remarkably during 2 decades. However, this upward trend was suddenly broken and the number of mails plunged sharply over the next 10 years before it went smoothly from 1950 to 1960 at about 12, 000 parcels. Then, the FedEx services soared again, and from 1970 it maintained the same level till the end.

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companies
, such as FedEx and TNT, from 1920 to 2000.

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saw
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number
 of parcels delivered by FedEx slightly
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changed
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some
 fluctuations.

In 1920, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of parcels of TNT were around 5, 000 and rose slightly
 to reach about 7, 500 in 1940. After it has levelled off for 20 years, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 increasing noticeably
 until 1960 and reached 11, 000. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
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 unchanged between 1960 and 1980, and unexpectedly
 soared dramatically
 in 1980 and surged by 15, 000 until 2, 000.

The figure for a FedEx This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 15, 000 in 1980 and it rose remarkably
 during 2 decades. However
, this upward trend was suddenly
 broken and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of mails plunged sharply
 over the next
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before
 it went smoothly
 from 1950 to 1960 at about 12, 000 parcels. Then, the FedEx services soared again, and from 1970 it maintained the same level till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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