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The mortality rate is increasing day by day . What are the reasons behind this ? Give some solutions to it .

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In the recent years, there has been a substantial incline in death rate among population. there are many reasons behind this situation such as increase in air pollution and consumption of drugs. This essay will describe the main causes and will give some potential measures to control this problem. There are numerous reasons of life lost. First, ambient air pollution is the prime cause of lowering life expectancy as human activities are destroying environment by spreading toxic chemicals, abnoxious gases and pollution which leads to cause many deaths. For example, a research had been conducted by energy policy institute of university of Chicago, America, in 2019 which reported that nearly 72% pollution is increased over a 10 year period which decilned the average life span of denizens. Therefore, the life span of masses in developing countries is declining by the spread of air pollutants. However, the mortality rate can be increased by detering people to reduce the overuse of transport and technological gadgets. Secondly, life expectancy can be achieved through higher standards of living. Health facilities can be more effective provided government invest adequate amount of finance on sanitation, housing, education and by establishing health care centers. Thus, it is high time people understood their liabilities to reduce pollution. To conclude, with a view to maintaining life expectancy, awareness should be brought among people regarding improved nutrition and public health measures and sanitization over medical interventions.

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