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how to make dough for a pizza

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The diagram shows how to make dough for a pizza and there are seven procedures to follow. On the first hand all the ingridients has being mixed for a certain amount of time and in different methods. After the mixing processes had finished dough has being kept to maximize larger in size and finally cut to equal peices. The ingredients used for making the dough are 500 grams of flour, 325 grams of water, 2 teaspoon of salt and 1/2 teaspoon of dry active yeast. The first phases of the dogh making pracess evalutaed in 7 sections. 1st phase: put all the ingredients in a stand mixer. 2nd phase: Mix all the ingridients in the stand mixer in slow speed for 2 minutes. 3rd phase: Mix the dough on midium speed to for 5 minutes. 4th phase: In this stage mix the dough again for 2 minutes in slow speed. The 5th phase is the most compulsory stage in making dough which is to let the dough rise minimum of 2 hours. 6th phase: kneading the dough to remove all air bubbles. The final phase is to cut the dough in 3 equal pieces, each pieces should be weigh around 275 grams.
The diagram
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for a pizza and there are seven procedures to follow. On the
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hand all the
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for a certain amount of time and in
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different
methods. After the mixing processes had finished
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has being
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kept
to maximize
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larger in size
and
finally
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cut
to equal
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peices
.

The ingredients
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for making the
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dough
are 500 grams of flour, 325 grams of water, 2
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of salt and 1/2 teaspoon of dry active yeast. The
first
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of the
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dogh
making
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pracess
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evalutaed
in 7 sections. 1st
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: put all the ingredients in a stand mixer. 2nd
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: Mix all the
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ingridients
in the stand mixer in slow speed for 2 minutes. 3rd
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: Mix the
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dough
on
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midium
speed to for 5 minutes. 4th
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: In this stage mix the
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again for 2 minutes in slow speed.

The 5th
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is the most compulsory stage in making
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dough
which is to
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let
the
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rise minimum of 2 hours. 6th
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: kneading the
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dough
to remove all air bubbles. The final
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is to
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the
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in 3 equal pieces, each
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pieces
should be
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weigh
around 275 grams.
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IELTS academic how to make dough for a pizza

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3 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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