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The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. r8e9o

The Pie charts Demonstrates Spending Of Government On Various Things In To Dissimilar Years 2010 and 2015. Overall In Boths Years Education Was MOst Prominent And Government Spent Highest Amount On it. Whereas Least Amount Was Spent on Transport, Culture, leisure And other In 2010 Education was Comprised OF 24% but in 2015 it Declined 3% Health Care Was Almost Remain Same Same Across The Years 21% And 20% respectively. Defence sector Was Fall BY 3%. Furthermore Transport and Culture or leisure Was Decreased by 1% And 2% On the Other Hand Welfae Was Accounted 8% in beginning of Period on the Contrary 13% in 2015. Spending on Interest On borrowing Was Doubled After Half a Decade. While Pensions And Other Was Remain similar In both Years.

The Pie charts Demonstrates Spending Of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 On Various Things In To Dissimilar Years 2010 and 2015.

Overall
 In Possible spelling mistake found.BothBathsBoothsMothsGothsBots
Boths
 Years Education Was Possible spelling mistake found.MostMustLostCostHostPost
MOst
 Prominent And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 Spent A determiner is probably missing here: "the Highest".The Highest
Highest
 Amount On it. Whereas Least Amount Was Spent
 on Transport, Culture, leisure And other

In 2010 Education Did you mean "comprised" or "consisted of" or "was composed of"?comprisedconsisted ofwas composed of
was Comprised OF
 24% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2015 it Declined 3% Health Care Was Almost Remain Possible typo: you repeated a wordSame
Same Same
 Across The Years 21% And 20% respectively
. Possible spelling mistake. 'Defence' is British English.Defense
Defence
 sector Was Fall BY 3%. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 Transport and Culture or leisure Was Decreased
 by 1% And 2%

On the Other Hand
Possible spelling mistake found.Welfare
Welfae
Was Accounted
 8% in beginning of Period on the Contrary
 13% in 2015. Spending on Interest On borrowing Was Doubled
 After Half a Decade. While Pensions And Other Was Consider using a past participle here: "remained".Remained
Remain
 similar In both Years. 