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the maps summarise the changes to livepool john moores university 2010 to 2016.

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The given maps show how much Liverpool john moores develop their university structure in 2016 compared to 2010. To begin with, in 2010, the library was on the northwest side, whereas at southwest has car parking place downside the road middle end. On top of that, road covers the admin building from the north and west, which was come from east to center and go to the south side. Moreover, one car parking aera is next to the east road, that is behind the three studying buildings biology, chemistry, and physics, which were located on the northeast side. Probing further, in 2016, southwest car park converted into a bus station, as well as footpath replaced the road and now the footpath walking aera has cafe and bus station into it. In the southwest aera. Whereas, admin building and library were at the same place, but it suite join the library aera in 2016. Although, lecture theatre make it place between the admin building and science building, that was seen on the top of east side. Overall, only library and admin building still on their old place, beside this almost every single build and road has been chnage into new place.
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develop their university structure in 2016 compared to 2010. To
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middle
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covers the admin
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from the north and west, which was
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from east to center and go to the south side.
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, one car parking
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,
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behind the three studying
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biology, chemistry, and physics, which
were located
on the northeast side. Probing
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, in 2016, southwest car park converted into a bus station,
as well
as footpath replaced the
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and
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the footpath walking
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and bus station into it. In the southwest
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. Whereas, admin
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the library
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between the admin
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library and admin
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, beside this almost every single build and
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