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The chart illustrates the amount of minutes of three various telephone calls in the UK over 7 years. Units are shown in billions.

The chart illustrates the amount of minutes of three various telephone calls in the UK over 7 years. Units are shown in billions. 8L6Pl
The chart illustrates the amount of minutes of three various telephone calls in the UK over 7 years. Units are shown in billions. Overall, over the given period, the number of local line calls was maximum, while the calls on mobiles comprised the minimum amount. With regard to the number of minutes of telephone calls, local line acoounted for 72 billions in 1995, this figure increased moderately untill 1999 and in this year it constituted 90 billions. Nevertheless, it declined markedly and made up 74 billion calls in 2002. National and international lines attracted attentions and went up sl, ightly from 38 billions to 60 billions between 1995 and 2002. There was the lowest popularity of mobiles which equaled to about 3 billions, however it rose minimally and comprised approximately 45 billion minutes in 2002.
The chart illustrates the amount of minutes of three various telephone
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calls
in the UK over 7 years. Units
are shown
in billions.

Overall
, over the
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period, the number of local line
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calls
was maximum, while the
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calls
on mobiles comprised the minimum amount.

With regard to the number of minutes of telephone
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, local line
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acoounted
for 72
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billions
in 1995, this figure increased
moderately
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untill
1999 and in this year it constituted 90
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billions
.
Nevertheless
, it declined
markedly
and made up 74
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billion
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calls
in 2002. National and international lines attracted attentions and went up
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,
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ightly
from 38
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to 60
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between 1995 and 2002. There was the lowest popularity of mobiles which equaled to about 3
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billions
,
however
it rose
minimally
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minutes in 2002.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the amount of minutes of three various telephone calls in the UK over 7 years. Units are shown in billions.

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