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the diagram below shows how the chip is made

the diagram below shows how the chip is made ebEjJ
The diagram shows the process by which the chip is done. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the chip procedure is divided into six sections, commencing with picking the qualified potatoes and terminating with the chip production. In the first place, potatoes undergo qualifying checks by the workers, after which they are made clean by the washing machine and continue to go along the water pump to the peeler. While the peeler is removing the skin of potatoes, starch will go through the bucket conveyor to the slicer. The slice blades are set in different shapes to cut potatoes into slices of chips. At once, these potato slices are rinsed under cold water. Following this, the slices move to the flat conveyor belt and go under the air blower to dry up the water. In the following stage, the potato slices are sent to the deep fryer, which fries them into the chips for a few minutes. After that, the chip slices continue to run on the conveyor belt to shower salt on the surface of the chip slices. At the end of the process, the chips will be separated to be packaged in cans and bag packers.
The diagram
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shows
the process by which the
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chip
is done
.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the
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chip
procedure
is divided
into six sections, commencing with picking the qualified
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potatoes
and terminating with the
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chip
production.

In the
first
place,
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potatoes
undergo qualifying
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checks
by the workers, after which they
are made
clean by the washing machine and continue to go along the water pump to the peeler. While the peeler is removing the skin of
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potatoes
, starch will go through the bucket conveyor to the slicer. The
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slice
blades
are set
in
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different
shapes to
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cut
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potatoes
into
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slices
of chips. At once, these
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potato
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slices
are rinsed
under
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cold
water. Following this, the
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slices
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move
to the flat conveyor belt and go under the air blower to dry up the water.

In the following stage, the
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potato
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slices
are
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sent
to the deep fryer, which fries them into the chips for a few minutes. After that, the
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chip
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slices
continue to run on the conveyor belt to shower salt on the surface of the
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chip
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slices
. At the
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end
of the process, the chips will
be separated
to
be packaged
in cans and bag packers.
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows how the chip is made

Academic
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4 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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