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The chart above shows the export earnings and their changes in values from 2015 to 2016

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The chart above shows the export earnings and their changes in values from 2015 to 2016. In 2015, petroleum products and engineered goods held the top spots in earnings. They also held the top spot earnings for the next year with a slight increase followed by the same growth for the rest of the products category. In 2015, petroleum products had the most earnings with $60 billion. Followed closely was engineered goods with $57 billion earnings. Gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and textiles are behind in number with $42, $31, and $26 billion respectively. In 2016, there was a slight increase in earnings generally for the export products. The top earnings were still held by petroleum goods with a 3% growth in values. Engineered goods had the most growth in that period with an 8, 5% rise in values. Agricultural products and textiles also had a rise in number with a 0, 81% and a 15, 24% respectively. Gems and jewellery were the only product category that suffered a loss with a 5, 18% decline. Generally, most of the products had an increase in export earnings from the year 2015 to 2016. Textiles had the most significant growth in values with a 15, 24% rise in that period.
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in values from 2015 to 2016. In 2015, petroleum
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held the top spots in
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had the most
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earnings
with $60 billion. Followed
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was engineered
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goods
with $57 billion
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. Gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural
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behind in number
with $42, $31, and $26 billion
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. The top
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goods
with a 3%
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growth
in values. Engineered
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had the most
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growth
in that period with an 8, 5% rise in values. Agricultural
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products
and textiles
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had a rise in number with a 0, 81% and a 15, 24%
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. Gems and
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jewellery
were the
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category that suffered a loss with a 5, 18% decline.

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had an increase in export
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from the year 2015 to 2016. Textiles had the most significant
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in values with a 15, 24% rise in that period.

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