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The maps shows changes in grange park plan from 1920 till now.

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The map gives an illustration of grange park's plans. As it has changed a lot now than 1920. In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the park which have been changed into an enormous amphitheater for concerts. As well as, musician's stage is also replaced with this new facility. In the center of park, there was a fountain on the contrary rose garden is taken place now and a number of seats have been also installed around it. In north-eastern side, the café is constructed in the place of rose garden. Moreover, the water plant pond has been removed in order to build children's play area. To the south-east, the glasshouse has gone and one beautiful water feature is made in this place. Furthermore, one new underground car park entrance has been introduced besides the water feature. Overview, it is crystal clear that park has been gone through variety of changes with the passage of time
The map gives an illustration of grange park's plans. As it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
a lot
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now
than 1920.

In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the
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park
which have been
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changed
into an enormous amphitheater for concerts.
As well
as, musician's stage is
also
replaced with this new facility. In the center of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
, there was a fountain
on the contrary
rose garden
is taken
place
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now
and a number of seats have been
also
installed around it.

In north-eastern side, the café
is constructed
in the place of rose garden.
Moreover
, the water plant pond has
been removed
in order to build children's play area. To the south-east, the glasshouse has gone and one
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beautiful
water feature
is made
in this place.
Furthermore
, one new underground car
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park
entrance has
been introduced
besides
the water feature.

Overview, it is crystal
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clear
that
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park
has
been gone
through variety of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
with the passage of time
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