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The maps shows changes in grange park plan from 1920 till now.

The maps shows changes in grange park plan from 1920 till now. Nwyyq

The map gives an illustration of grange park's plans. As it has changed a lot now than 1920. In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the park which have been changed into an enormous amphitheater for concerts. As well as, musician's stage is also replaced with this new facility. In the center of park, there was a fountain on the contrary rose garden is taken place now and a number of seats have been also installed around it. In north-eastern side, the café is constructed in the place of rose garden. Moreover, the water plant pond has been removed in order to build children's play area. To the south-east, the glasshouse has gone and one beautiful water feature is made in this place. Furthermore, one new underground car park entrance has been introduced besides the water feature. Overview, it is crystal clear that park has been gone through variety of changes with the passage of time

The map gives an illustration of grange park's plans. As it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a lot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 than 1920.

In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 which have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into an enormous amphitheater for concerts. As well
 as, musician's stage is also
 replaced with this new facility. In the center of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, there was a fountain on the contrary
 rose garden is taken
 place This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and a number of seats have been also
 installed around it.

In north-eastern side, the café is constructed
 in the place of rose garden. Moreover
, the water plant pond has been removed
 in order to build children's play area. To the south-east, the glasshouse has gone and one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 water feature is made
 in this place. Furthermore
, one new underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 entrance has been introduced
besides
 the water feature.

Overview, it is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been gone
 through variety of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 with the passage of time