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The maps show the layout of Grange Park in 1920 and today respectively.

The maps show the layout of Grange Park in 1920 and today respectively. KlPg9

The maps show the layout of Grange Park in 1920 and today respectively. According to the first map, the fountain was in the center of the park and to the west, there was a stage for musicians, which was surrounded by two rose gardens and four groups of seats. Besides, there was a pond for water plants in the northeast corner, which was next to a rose garden. And there was a glasshouse right opposite them and a group of seats were next to it. As can be seen from the second map, the central fountain has been replaced by a rose garden accompanied by four groups of seats. The original pond for water plants has been transformed into a children’s play area with a cafe to the west of it. A water feature has taken the place of the glasshouse and the stage for musicians has become an amphitheatre for concerts. What is more, an underground car park has been added. In conclusion, Grange Park has become more convenient and modern now.

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Park
 in 1920 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
respectively
. According to the first
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park
 and to the west, there was a stage for musicians, which was surrounded
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As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the second map, the central fountain has been replaced
 by a rose garden accompanied by four groups of seats. The original pond for water plants has been transformed
 into a children’s play area with a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 to the west of it. A water feature has taken the place of the glasshouse and the stage for musicians has become an Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts. What is more
, an underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. In conclusion
, Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has become more convenient and modern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. 