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The Product Life-cycle of the car

The Product Life-cycle of the car ORN9d

The diagram shows the different stages of a car's life cycle, highlighting how it is manufactured and repaired. Overall, there are seven stages of a car's life cycle starting from its manufacturing stage up until the point it is recycled. It all starts with the gathering of raw materials which are mined and can also be used to form components. Once these materials and gears are procured, these are then delivered to factories where the cars are built and manufactured. After the cars are produced, they will be sold mostly through dealerships. Consequently, cars that are bought are used by an average of three owners and after a while, they will undergo repairs and services every now and again. Afterwards, once these cars detoriate and are deemed unusable, they will be sold for scrap. At last, materials that are recyclable will continue its life cycle. On the other hand, the unusable parts will be disposed.

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