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The chart shows where people first saw the advertisement for a popular sportswear company.

The chart shows where people first saw the advertisement for a popular sportswear company. kWB72
The chart shows where people first saw the advertisement for a popular sportswear company. Overall more people know the advertisement for a famous sportswear of Over than Under, more than twofold. But the number of people who see the advertisement on internet of Under more than Over. Newspaper advertising Under have more people than Over. Both companies have the same number of viewers on billboards with Under have 10000 and over have 12500.
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IELTS academic The chart shows where people first saw the advertisement for a popular sportswear company.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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