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Southwest airport structure

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The given plans describe information about the airport site now and after development. It can be easily seen that southwest airport area will overall redevelop next year. In departure area there is only cafe and check-in but in next year it will be respectively replaced by bag-drop and check-in also cafe will go to the left side corner near to departure entrance. In following year, there has been shops after security and passport control so, everyone will do shopping before boarding time and can wait in boarding area. Although there is 8 gates for boarding and walkway, it will expand with 18 gates and sky train. In arrival area there is nothing after customs and passport control in order to it will be developed by cafe, ATM and car hiring. So everyone can easily take their change currency by ATM and car hire is near to arrivals gate on right side.
The
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given
plans
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describe
information about the airport site
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now
and after development.

It can be
easily
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seen
that southwest airport
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area
will
overall
redevelop
next
year. In departure
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area
there is
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only
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and
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check
-in
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but
in
next
year it will be
respectively
replaced by bag-drop and
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check
-in
also
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
will go to the
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left
side corner near to departure entrance. In following year, there has been shops after security and passport control
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so
, everyone will
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go shopping".
do shopping
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before
boarding time and can wait in boarding
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area
. Although
Did you mean "there are 8 gates"?
there is 8 gates
for boarding and walkway, it will expand with 18 gates and sky train.

In arrival
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area
there is nothing after customs and passport control in order to it will
be developed
by
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
, ATM and car hiring.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
everyone can
easily
take their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
currency by ATM and car hire is near to arrivals gate on right side.

IELTS academic Southwest airport structure

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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