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Tea and coffee buying habits in five cities in Australia

Tea and coffee buying habits in five cities in Australia KloP6
The bar chart illustrates the information about society habits of coffee and tea consumption in five Australian towns. Overall, going to a café in the previous 4 weeks was still the highest throughout these five Australian cities except in Adelaide which buying instant coffee was the famous way in last 4 weeks. Apparently, a number of people buying fresh coffee were not popular as much as the other ways. In Sydney, it had started about 45%; however, there was a slow decreasing in Melbourne. Moreover, it was falling to its lowest point in Brisbane while the number of people enjoying consuming firm coffee was increasing gradually in Adelaide and Hobart. On the contrary, buying instant coffee and spending time with coffee and tea in café were seemed to be the interesting solution for coffee and tea lovers. Almost 60% of population in Sydney enjoyed going to a café more than the other, and hit the peak in Melbourne for around 65%. It had fallen closing to 55% in Brisbane as the number of people who bought instant coffee, making the gab between it and going to café was decreasing, were increasing. Although enjoying your life with coffee in café was always the best way in others, people in Adelaide preferred to spend their money on instant coffee for about 50%. On the other hand, spending time and money at café was still the most popular way.
The bar chart illustrates the information about society habits of
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and tea consumption in five Australian towns.

Overall
, going to a café in the previous 4 weeks was
still
the highest throughout these five Australian cities except in Adelaide which buying instant
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coffee
was the
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famous
way in last 4 weeks.

Apparently
, a number of
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people
buying fresh
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coffee
were not popular as much as the
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other
ways. In Sydney, it had
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started
about 45%;
however
, there was a slow decreasing in Melbourne.
Moreover
, it was falling to its lowest point in Brisbane while the number of
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people
enjoying consuming firm
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coffee
was increasing
gradually
in Adelaide and Hobart.

On the contrary
, buying instant
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coffee
and spending time with
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coffee
and tea in café
were seemed
to be the interesting solution for
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coffee
and tea lovers. Almost 60% of population in Sydney enjoyed going to a café more than the
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other
, and hit the peak in Melbourne for around 65%. It had fallen closing to 55% in Brisbane as the number of
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people
who
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bought
instant
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coffee
, making the gab between it and going to café was decreasing, were increasing. Although enjoying your life with
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coffee
in café was always the best way in others,
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people
in Adelaide preferred to spend their money on instant
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coffee
for about 50%. On the
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hand, spending time and money at café was
still
the most popular way.
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IELTS academic Tea and coffee buying habits in five cities in Australia

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