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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD. 0EoRG
SIX PIE CHARTS WERE PROVIED WITH DIFFERENT PERPOSES OF WATER USED IN SIX REGIONS LIKE EUROPE, NORTH AMERICA, SOUTH AMERICA, CENTRAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA AND AFRICA. NORTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS MAXIMUM INDUSTRIAL USE OF WATER WHERE AS CENTAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA, SOUTH AMERICA AND AFRICA HAS MAXIUM USE IN AGRICULTURAL USES. HOWEVER, SOUTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS A MAJOR PERCENTAGE USED AS DOMISTIC USES AT NINTEEN AND FIFTEEN PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. WHERE AS NORTH AMERICA USES 13 PERCENTAGE IN ITS DOMESTIC USE. CENTRAL ASIA AND AFRICA HAS THEIR INSTURIAL USE LESS THEN THEIR DOMESTIC USE WHILE OTHER HAVE HIGH INDUSTIAL WATER DEMAND.
SIX PIE CHARTS WERE
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DIFFERENT
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PERPOSES
OF WATER
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USED
IN SIX REGIONS LIKE EUROPE, NORTH AMERICA, SOUTH AMERICA, CENTRAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA AND AFRICA. NORTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS MAXIMUM INDUSTRIAL
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WHERE AS
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CENTAL
ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA, SOUTH AMERICA AND AFRICA HAS
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MAXIUM
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IN AGRICULTURAL
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HOWEVER
, SOUTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS A MAJOR PERCENTAGE
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AS
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DOMISTIC
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AT
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NINTEEN
AND FIFTEEN PERCENT
RESPECTIVELY
.
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WHERE AS
NORTH AMERICA
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USES
13 PERCENTAGE IN ITS DOMESTIC
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. CENTRAL ASIA AND AFRICA HAS THEIR
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INSTURIAL
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LESS
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THEN
THEIR DOMESTIC
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WHILE OTHER HAVE HIGH
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INDUSTIAL
WATER DEMAND.

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