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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD. 0EoRG

SIX PIE CHARTS WERE PROVIED WITH DIFFERENT PERPOSES OF WATER USED IN SIX REGIONS LIKE EUROPE, NORTH AMERICA, SOUTH AMERICA, CENTRAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA AND AFRICA. NORTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS MAXIMUM INDUSTRIAL USE OF WATER WHERE AS CENTAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA, SOUTH AMERICA AND AFRICA HAS MAXIUM USE IN AGRICULTURAL USES. HOWEVER, SOUTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS A MAJOR PERCENTAGE USED AS DOMISTIC USES AT NINTEEN AND FIFTEEN PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. WHERE AS NORTH AMERICA USES 13 PERCENTAGE IN ITS DOMESTIC USE. CENTRAL ASIA AND AFRICA HAS THEIR INSTURIAL USE LESS THEN THEIR DOMESTIC USE WHILE OTHER HAVE HIGH INDUSTIAL WATER DEMAND.

SIX PIE CHARTS WERE Possible spelling mistake found.ProvidedProvedPROV IED
PROVIED
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DIFFERENT
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PERPOSES
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USED
 IN SIX REGIONS LIKE EUROPE, NORTH AMERICA, SOUTH AMERICA, CENTRAL ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA AND AFRICA. NORTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS MAXIMUM INDUSTRIAL You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandlinghelpservicepracticevalueneed
USE
 OF WATER Did you mean "WHEREAS"?WHEREAS
WHERE AS
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CENTAL
 ASIA, SOUTH EAST ASIA, SOUTH AMERICA AND AFRICA HAS Possible spelling mistake found.MaximumMaxim
MAXIUM
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandlinghelpservicepracticevalueneed
USE
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USES
. HOWEVER
, SOUTH AMERICA AND EUROPE HAS A MAJOR PERCENTAGE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
USED
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DOMISTIC
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USES
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NINTEEN
 AND FIFTEEN PERCENT RESPECTIVELY
. Did you mean "WHEREAS"?WHEREAS
WHERE AS
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USES
 13 PERCENTAGE IN ITS DOMESTIC You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhandlinghelpservicepracticevalueneed
USE
. CENTRAL ASIA AND AFRICA HAS THEIR Possible spelling mistake found.InitialNaturalIndustrialInternalIntervalMinisterial
INSTURIAL
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USE
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THEN
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USE
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INDUSTIAL
 WATER DEMAND. 