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The map below shows the changes made to a hospital layout plan from 2005 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the changes made to a hospital layout plan from 2005 to the present day. eeMxB
Plans A and B show the development of a hospital from 2005 to the present day. In 2005 the main entrance was located in front of the health center with 12 car parking spaces outside. The reception desk was at the center of the building is surrounded by 3 consultation rooms and the office. Few seats have been arranged on both sides of the hallway from the entrance to the reception desk. In addition, there was a physiotherapy room also located behind the reception desk. The garden surrounded the health center was quite wide. In the present-day plan, there are additional facilities that have been added a minor operating room for minor procedures and a consultation room as well. Moreover, its entrance is relocated at the corner of the building with a new children's play area and the new reception desk is located just opposite. The hallway is modified with several more seats. Finally, the size of the car park increased more than twice with 30 spaces. Thus, the garden area is decreased.
Plans A and B
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show
the development of a hospital from 2005 to the present day.

In 2005 the main entrance
was located
in front of the health center with 12 car parking spaces outside. The
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reception
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desk
was at the center of the building
is surrounded
by 3 consultation
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rooms
and the office. Few seats have
been arranged
on both sides of the hallway from the entrance to the
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reception
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
desk
.
In addition
, there was a physiotherapy
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room
also
located behind the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
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desk
. The garden surrounded the health center was quite wide.

In the present-day plan, there are additional facilities that have been
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added
a minor operating
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room
for minor procedures and a consultation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
as well
.
Moreover
, its entrance
is relocated
at the corner of the building with a new children's play area and the new
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reception
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desk
is located
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just
opposite. The hallway
is modified
with several more seats.
Finally
, the size of the car park increased more than twice with 30 spaces.
Thus
, the garden area
is decreased
.
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