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The maps show road system now and future.

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The maps compare the layout of the road system with its future design. What stands out from the maps is that the proposed road system will become more modern and save than now. Looking at the current plan of the road system revals that there is school is located the North-West side of map. Across the city road there is located a supermarket. The both side of low lane road there are 3 houses. On the forest road there is only 1 frequent accident, while in the city road has 2 frequent accident, in low lane road has 1 frequent accident now. In terms of the future developments, it is predicted that there will be 4 traffic lights, reduce the frequent accident and roundabout. Roundabout is expected to built the middle of the forest road and North -East corner of roundabout there will be a supermarket. Traffic lights is planned to erected the west side of city road
The maps compare the layout of the
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system with its future design.

What stands out from the maps is that the proposed
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system will become more modern and save than
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plan of the
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that there is school
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the North-West side of map. Across the city
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there
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a supermarket. The both side of low lane
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there are 3
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houses
. On the forest
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there is
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1
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, while in the city
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has 2
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, in low lane
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has 1
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In terms of the future developments, it
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that there will be 4 traffic lights,
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and roundabout. Roundabout is
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the middle of the forest
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and North -East corner of roundabout there will be a supermarket. Traffic lights
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the west side of city
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6.0
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