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The given maps depict an island how it looks like before the construction and present look after adding some tourist facilities. Overall it is clear at the beginning of the period this island was a isolated area. however now it is a tourist hotspot. it is apparent from the first map tha island was 100 metres log and there were few coconut trees and the beach was located west corner of the island. on the other hand after development this became more attractive for tourist. The size of the island is same as before. we can see there is a reception and behind that restaurant is located. there are more than 10accomodations are situated in west side of the reception and north east side of the reception. new swimming area is added to near the beach. apart from that footpaths have built to reach accomodation areas very easily and only one vehicle track has built around the reception and reach to the restaurant. this vehicle path has began near the pier.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps depict an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 how it looks like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the construction and present look after adding This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tourist facilities.

Overall
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 at the beginning of the period this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 isolated area. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?however,
however
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is a tourist hotspot.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is apparent from the first
 map Possible spelling mistake found.theyTHAthethattheirthan
tha
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 was 100 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 log and there were few coconut trees and the beach was located
 west corner of the island.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand after development this became more attractive for tourist. The size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 is same as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 there is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 and behind that restaurant is located
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are more than 10accomodations are situated
 in west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNew
new
 swimming area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to near the beach. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterApart
apart
 from that footpaths have built to reach Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 areas This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
easily
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 has built around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 and reach to the restaurant. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 vehicle path has Use past participle here: "begun".begun
began
 near the pier. 