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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. OG07
The chart illustrates the gender distribution of students whether they engaged in full-time education or part-time education in Britain in the period from 1970/71 to 1990/91. Overall, both male and female students mostly studied in part-time education compared to full-time education. Through the period, the number of woman students increased dramatically, whilst male students decreased in part-time education. In 1970/71, there were exactly 1. 000 male students in full-time education which after decreased to just over 800 before rose slightly to around 850. However, there was a gradual increase in the number of full-time males and this figure doubled at the end of the period. In terms of females, around 750 of them studied as a part-time student having a slight increase it reached to almost 800 in 1980/81. After that date, this number jumped up to more than 1. 000 female students in 1990/91. On the other hand, there were around 50 of them who engaged in full-time education, with a significant increase, this number reached almost 200, and rose moderately to around 250 in 1990 and 1991.
The chart illustrates the gender distribution of
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students
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education
in Britain in the period
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from 1970/71
to 1990/91.

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, both male and female
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students
mostly
studied in part-time
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education
compared to full-time
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education
. Through the period, the
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number
of woman
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students
increased
dramatically
, whilst male
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students
decreased in part-time education.

In 1970/71, there were exactly 1. 000 male
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students
in full-time
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education
which after decreased to
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over 800
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850.
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, there was a gradual increase in the
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of full-time
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males
and this figure doubled at the
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end
of the period.

In terms of females,
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750 of them studied as a part-time
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student
having a slight increase it reached to almost 800 in 1980/81. After that date, this
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jumped up to more than 1. 000 female
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in 1990/91.
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50 of them who engaged in full-time
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, with a significant increase, this
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reached almost 200, and rose
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250 in 1990 and 1991.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

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