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The diagram below shows the structure of a basic rocket engine

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The given diagram depicts the basic structure and the procedure of the combustion that takes place in rocket engine. Overall, this process involves four main stages, which initiate with the basic equipment named two separation tanks; and ends up with the nozzle respectively. On serutinizing, it is elucidated that to begins with, we need two tanks. One is fuel tank and another one is oxygen tank. From the fuel tank the fuel is pumped in the second stage. Then after, it reaches through the injector and it releases the fuel into the combustion chamber. Similarly, the oxygen tank oxides through the oxidizer pump and it releases into the combustion chamber. Further enumearting and extracting key features, it is observed that after, the both liquid and gas combined together and the products of combustion are formed. These products get together and passes into the nozzle of the rocket engine.
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combustion
that takes place in rocket engine.

Overall
, this process involves four main stages, which initiate with the basic equipment named two separation
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tanks
; and ends up with the nozzle
respectively
.

On
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serutinizing
, it
is elucidated
that to
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begins
with, we need two
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tanks
. One is
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fuel
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tank
and another one is oxygen
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tank
. From the
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fuel
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tank
the
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fuel
is pumped
in the second stage. Then after, it reaches through the injector and it releases the
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fuel
into the
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combustion
chamber.
Similarly
, the oxygen
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tank
oxides through the oxidizer pump and it releases into the
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combustion
chamber.

Further
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enumearting
and extracting key features, it
is observed
that after, the both liquid and gas
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combined together
and the products of
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combustion
are formed
. These products
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get
together and passes into the nozzle of the rocket engine.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the structure of a basic rocket engine

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