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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. PBGX
The bar graphs demonstrates how water was used by distinct sectors for decade between 1900 -2000Its clear that water, used by agriculture was top most, followed by industrial sector, which was far than used for domestic use. In 1900, where agriculture used 300 km3 which was drastically increased over years and years and gained the top position in 2000 with 3000km3 where as till the half of century there was similar trend of gain for industrial and domestic use. However after 1950 onwards use for industrial purpose was increased periodically and lead the second position in 2020, domestic use was raised quite lower as compared with the industrial and agriculture use. table illustrate consumptions of water for irrigated land and according to the individual person. Brazil was the top in the table which largest 176 million population which needed 26500 km3 irrigated land and highest use of water for 359 m3 per person where as Congo has lower population and which resulted into quite use of water consummation per person
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for irrigated land and according to the individual person. Brazil was the top in the table which largest 176 million population which needed 26500 km3 irrigated land and highest
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IELTS academic The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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