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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. RPXo
There are 2 map illustrates some developments at university campus that have been made from 2010 to the present day. As it can be seen campus has been growed and improved so that, the number of student accommodation has increased. At a first glance we can see that there are two student accommodation instead of one on the other side of the road next to the science building. The floor of university office has been increased and replaced by science office. According to moving of science department, the old science-art building is only art building now and has reconstructed. There is another student accommodation in front of the lake which has been builted in place of shops and restaurant and there is a new road there. Besides this, other student accommodation which was replaces by the left side of the lake has been developed and turned to a building which contain student facilities such as shops offices and so on. Finally, we can see that there is not any sitting are and greennes which surround the lake.
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map
illustrates
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developments at university campus that have
been made
from 2010 to the present day. As it can be
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seen
campus has been
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growed
and
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improved
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so
that, the number of
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student
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accommodation
has increased.

At a
first
glance we can
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see
that there are two
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student
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accommodation
instead
of one on the other side of the road
next
to the science
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building
. The floor of university office has
been increased
and replaced by science office. According to moving of science department, the
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old
science-art
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building
is
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only
art
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building
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now
and has reconstructed. There is another
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student
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accommodation
in front of the lake which has been
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builted
in place of shops and restaurant and there is a new road there.
Besides
this, other
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student
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accommodation
which was replaces by the
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left
side of the lake has
been developed
and turned to a
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building
which contain
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student
facilities such as shops offices and
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so
on.
Finally
, we can
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see
that there is not any sitting are and
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greennes
which surround the lake.
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IELTS academic The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

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