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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.(task 1) Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?(task 2)

TASK 1 The map illustrates various kinds of changes being made from the year 2010 till the present date to the university campus. Overall, the shops and restaurants have been relocated in one single building whereas, the area for lawn and seating has been eradicated. There has been an addition to the student accommodation facilities as compared to the campus structure in 2010. The lake has been the only place which has not gone through any renovation. The teaching block has been bifurcated into two separate building, namely the first building being only for arts and the latter one of science. The shops and restaurants have been removed and they have been relocated in the student facilities building in the south west region. The place for lawn and seating cannot be visible in the current map structure of the campus. There was only a single building back in 2010 for accommodation, but now there have been two addition buildings constructed, one just besides the old one and the second one in the east side of the campus. A new path has also been built for the student facilities.

TASK 1

The map illustrates various kinds of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
being made
 from the year 2010 till the present date to the university campus.

Overall
, the shops and restaurants have been relocated
 in one single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 whereas, the area for lawn and seating has been eradicated
. There has been an addition to the student accommodation facilities as compared to the campus structure in 2010. The lake has been the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 place which has not gone through any renovation.

The teaching block has been bifurcated
 into two separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
, namely
 the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for arts and the latter one of science. The shops and restaurants have been Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).removed, and
removed and
 they have been relocated
 in the student facilities You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
 region. The place for lawn and seating cannot be visible in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 map structure of the campus.

There was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 back in 2010 for accommodation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 there have been two addition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 constructed, one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
besides
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 one and the second one in the east side of the campus. A new path has also
been built
 for the student facilities. 