Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the maps show he change of pentland from

the maps show he change of pentland from L3qj3
The pictorial representations illustrate the change of Penthland from 1998 to 2007. Overall, in 2007 the road split inti two parts before atteching to the yachtt marine. More specifically, in 1980 road was started from sea and in the middle there was crossroads, to the east direction car park. Grassland stuated southbeast corner of the park whereas, industrial area was opposite to this. In 2007, the place of grassland was taken by houses and in the northeast direction apartments were established. Cinema was also built in Southeast corner of the map
The pictorial representations illustrate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Penthland
from 1998 to 2007.

Overall
, in 2007 the road split
Possible spelling mistake found.
inti
two parts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
Possible spelling mistake found.
atteching
to the
Possible spelling mistake found.
yachtt
marine.

More
specifically
, in 1980 road was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
from sea and in the middle there was crossroads, to the east direction car park. Grassland
Possible spelling mistake found.
stuated
Possible spelling mistake found.
southbeast
corner of the park whereas, industrial area was opposite to this.

In 2007, the place of grassland
was taken
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
and in the northeast direction apartments
were established
. Cinema was
also
built in Southeast corner of the
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
map
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic the maps show he change of pentland from

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
90 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    Describe a day out that you enjoyed recently
    It was two years ago that I went to Ao Vua swimming pool. I went out with my grandmother, my mom, my aunt and my younger brother. My grandfather wanted to finish his work in the local where we live, so he didn't join us. At Ao Vua swimming pool, we participated in many outdoor games like playing in ...
  • 5.5band
    Report: working from home
    This report sets out to assess the current benefits and inconveniences about the implementation of home working in the company. Finally, ways to implement this new working opportunities will be suggested. Some information compilation and staff surveys have been assessed to understand how this measu...
  • 5.5band
    language learners projection. line graph
    The graph gives statistics about how many people who will learn three major world languages over the decade from 2030 to 2040. Overall, what stands out from the figure is that predicted number of students who will be learners of Spanish, English and Mandarin languages, seem to be in an upward trend...
  • 6.5band
    Percentage of self employed works of the total workforce in 1998 and 2008.
    the bar chat shows the information of the total number of self-employed workers in comparison to the workforce. In two specific years which are 1998 and 2008. Overall there were an upward trend in the self-employed figures. The highest proportion was recorded in Turkey with approximately 60% and 40...
  • 6.5band
    participation by young people in some leisure activities
    The bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people taking part in five different activities in spare time in the US in 2013. It is evident that, males was interested in playing computer games most, while most females engaged in shopping. In addition, men participated the least in reading, wher...
  • 7band
    • The bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people taking part in five different activities in spare time in the US in 2013
    The bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people taking part in five different activities in spare time in the US in 2013. It is evident that males were interested in playing computer games most, while most females engaged in shopping. In addition, men participated the least in reading, wher...